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Looking for a Taste of Real Life

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hey so another sketch from one of my numerous flights~ :D
and of course what is any doodling session without my jane bby ~~~<3
yar idk...felt like drawing elaborate hair and decor...and then thought of victorian profile portraits and flowers and err...well yeah it turned into this XD
flat colours cause...i dont usually have flat colours? o3o

enjoy guys~ :D

*rolls away to study for geo like omg ive no clue wtf its about*



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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Hello! I'm tired so let's get straight to the point (harsh, no? XD)
Anyways, overall, the purple colours and the flowers give off a nice, slightly vintage, but a soft and comfortable feeling to the pictures. One thing I would mention though is how plain it looks overall. The flower in her hair is nice and those are the types of details you want to make the picture less boring, however, the colours you chose is something I disagree with. The flower in her hair should give a bigger 'pop' in my opinion.
Secondly, regarding facial expression, I honestly like it, but there are a couple of main things I don't like.
First, her jawbone seems very square, and her neck seems extremely thick too. If you made the neck a bit thinner she'd have a more 'feminine' face, and if you round her jawbones a bit more, that'd be better too.
Secondly, I don't see much shading in the place her shoulders are supposed to be in, which gives a slightiy flat and 2-D feeling. Maybe a line indicating where her arm is would help for the proportion of the image (plus curves <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>)
At first glance, it doesn't seem like it, but now that I look at it, it seems like the bangs aren't really 'bangs', and it looks like a tuff of hair to me. Maybe making it smaller and thinner would help...?
But overall, I think the quality and the softness of this drawing is beautiful. Well done! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>